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Wordle-based representation of TUT

Above is a Wordle interpretation of the TUT manuscript. The bigger the word, the more important.

[As of Dec 6, 2011, I'm going into the first stages of production, so the comment period is now closed. My many thanks for the comments received!]

As I’ve noted in other posts, I’m hard at work on a new fantasy epic action-adventure novel. The Unexpected Traveler is a big book—much more so than any of the broom books.

The story
The story is fairly simple. An elven prince is stranded in our world and Peter Wright helps him get back. So far so good. But the elf’s world has changed mightily in the five years he’s been gone. Only Prince Rainier, the elf, can fix it. Peter, like all humans, gains magic when transported into the new world, and his magic is crucial in the long adventure to put Rainier on the throne of the High King, to rule in peace over all seven sentient creatures: elves, sprites, gnomes, faeries, dwarves, eagles, and dragons. They gather many allies as they travel across Orgon, Felding, Dordon, and finally into Dakut. But the Conspirators are strong and many are loyal to them. The Tax Wars have decimated all the lands of Gindikila, the entire known world (Gë-heē’n-dhaï-h’kâi-h’laeh in Elvish). Rainier’s father, King Randinier, was murdered and Rainier’s older brother, Ranfolger, sits as a puppet on the throne. Read of conspiracies and treason, friendship and brotherhood, minor skirmishes and major battles, and see if you can spot the traitors.

Excerpt: “Oh, this is just fantastic!” I yelled. “We escaped the water, got out of the cave, and now we’re locked in a dungeon!”
     I stood and angrily brushed off dust and grit. The air was just as chilly as in the cave, but vastly less humid. I looked for my hardhat but it was nowhere to be seen. Tom stood at the door of the little cell and looked through a small barred window, pointing his flashlight everywhere.
    “Yes, my dear Peter, to use the form of address common in our world,” he replied calmly. “The door is indeed locked. And I see nothing up and down the hallway. But that’s to be expected. This level hasn’t been used in decades. Not since my grandfather Rainden pacified the land.”

Excerpt: “We’ve discovered that humans are particularly adept at politics. They seem to enjoy pitting themselves against each other.” He smirked at me. “So, we leave an elvish guard at each Library to keep the peace. And…”—more swallowing—“each Library also has a small dungeon, used as needed.”

Excerpt: Very slowly we ascended the stairs. At the top a heavy wood door hung on one hinge. We crept around it. The breeze told us we’d hit ground level—but instead of arching ceilings, night ruled the sky. All was still except for our footfalls, Rainier’s mail, and the slight rattle of my sword in its sheath.
    The more we walked, the more destruction we found. A room with several large windows held only rain-washed ashes, charred wood and bits of glass; the roof had been burned. Rainier told me it was the Document Room with the cadastral records, and its destruction meant none could defend title to their land—not human nor elf nor dwarf nor anyone else in all the land of Orgon.

Excerpt: “And so, King Dimnarin and honored Council, that is how I came to be here. Your brother, the fair Diminit, has been more than kind and has seen to our every need. I am glad to be here and offer what services I can. It appears I have a magical gift, and I lay it at your disposal.”
     I made this up as I went along. All the fantasy movies I’d seen included formal, pompous speech, so I figured I ought to give it a try.
     “What I do not understand,” growled an ancient, grizzled Council member, “is why you have so assiduously defended this elf. And until you entered this room, you wore an elven sword and carried an elven shield.”

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Book Review: Eragon

About a year ago, before starting to write The Unexpected Traveler, I asked an English professor at Mesa State to recommend a couple current fantasy books he thought were well written. He suggested a couple, and I suppose I ought to be reviewing those, not Eragon by Christopher Paolini, which was not on the professor’s list.

But…Eragon is the series that’s selling these days. It’s wildly popular and for awhile occupied the rarified air atop the NY Times bestseller list. Yet it has garnered nothing except critical…well…criticism. No reviewer likes it. They consider it to be immature—it is, after all, the work of a teenager—and not worth reading. (There’s a strong smell of jealousy here! Paolini has a popular book and they don’t.)

But then again, J.K. Rowling went through the same experience. Quite

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Mt. Sneffels Press Publishes About Phillip on Kindle

About Phillip cover

"About Phillip" takes the young adult reader through Phillip's most wrenching year yet. On the plus side, he discovers he's a track star. On the downside? Well, there's his father.... Click on the image to go straight to the Amazon Kindle page where you can download About Phillip for only $3.95.


What’s the easiest way to publish these days? On Kindle, that’s what! I’ve put my own fantasy books here in the Fantasy Catalog, and have published books for others, but Kindle (and other e-publishers) seems to be taking over everything. Amazon says their Kindle is their most popular electronics product, and they now sell more books via Kindle than printed books. I’ve put both Broom 1 and Broom 2 on Kindle and will shortly put Broom 3 up there too.
 
I looked into Kindle a couple years ago when putting a presentation together for local authors about marketing on the web, and I updated it last year (here) for another workshop. It can’t get any easier!
 
Well, I’ve been sitting on a manuscript for some time now—one I really like. It’s not fantasy, it’s set in the real world (well, if you consider Boulder to be the real world) and involves real people (well, okay, made-up characters). It’s a serious attempt to look at how family discord might play out in a Mormon setting.
 
Phillip is 15. He learns that his passion for jogging has put him in a position to help the high school track team, which he joins with considerable trepidation. He’s also a computer nerd and works at a pet store where he seems more simpatico with the pets than the people. The issue is his father. Phillip has no interest in becoming an eagle scout like his older brother, nor is he interested in kow-towing to his stern father. Father and son live on different planets, and several people are caught between. Read Phillip’s joy’s and sorrows in About Phillip and once again enter the world of high school.
 
About Phillip is available only on Kindle. You can get your own copy here on Amazon for only $3.95.
 
And a note about Kindle: Yes, you can buy a Kindle e-book reader—the prices have dropped dramatically of late. Or…you can download a free Kindle app for your PC so you can read on your computer or laptop. Or, you can download a free Kindle app to your iPod Touch, iPad, iPhone, or your smart phone. Note the word “free” there—the app doesn’t cost anything, and if you do end up buying a Kindle, you can transfer all your purchases to it with no further fees. Do it today!

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Weather Page Fixed

Weather station atop roof

Davis weather station atop my roof. It's solar powered and sends info down to the console via wireless link.

My weather station atop my roof works just fine. The wireless receiver in my study works just fine. The data logger works just fine. But the Ambient Virtual Weather Station software has been nothing but trouble ever since I set it up. I use a laptop I got on eBay that sports Win 98 SE, which Ambient is supposed to run on. And I set it up to create a page on this blog (http://mtsneffelspress.com/projects/wx/) that provides “real time” weather.
 
Well, the stinker was so undependable I finally just turned it off. But I discovered I wasn’t the only one looking at it. Reader Rob McAtee, ham radio license W9RZ, commented on my other (and more active) blog (see this page) that he missed the information. He also mentioned Weatherlink software. This led to digging through the documentation that came with the weather station data logger. Weatherlink is the software that Davis, the maker of the Vantage Pro 2 station, provided with the hardware. I’d always heard Ambient was the better software. Well, I crawled (and I do mean crawled) through the Weatherlink documentation and fixed the weather page. Check it out here. It’s not as snazzy as Ambient, but it does seem to work. Time will tell to see how stable it is, but it’s been up for several days now, so I have high hopes. I’m still using that old Win 98 SE laptop.
 
The station is a Davis Vantage Pro2 with standard radiation shield (click here for product details). The data logger (a plug-in to the console that collects info and makes it available to the computer via USB cable) and associated software is Weatherlink (click here for more info).

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Catalog Updates

I’ve renamed the catalogs. Formerly, I had one catalog (“our catalog”) for books actually published by Mt. Sneffels Press, and another catalog (“extended catalog”) for books I don’t publish but for which I do web fulfillment. With the addition of the OCHS book, there are enough history-oriented books to re-divide the catalog, and history is proving popular. Now there are three catalogs: the History Catalog, the Fantasy Catalog (fantasy novels, including the Flying Broomstick series), and the Medley Catalog, which includes humor, poetry, essays, a children’s book, and short stories. Those books that aren’t published by Mt. Sneffels Press are so indicated. Enjoy!

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Ouray County Historical Society Journal publishes 4th volume

OCHS new book

The OCHS has published Vol 4 in their Journal series, filled with well-researched, entertaining stories about life in Ouray County back in the "good old days." Click on the image to order.

Mt. Sneffels Press is proud to announce that we’ve published the Ouray County (Colorado) Historical Society’s Journal Volume 4, new for 2010. The book has 11 well-researched history articles all illustrated with multiple black and white photographs. You’ll enjoy stories such as the mining history of Ouray County, memories of Ouray’s San Juan Miners Hospital, the Sneffels Stagecoach holdup, the Marlow brothers’ Texas ordeal and their life in Ouray County. This book joins our History Catalog, bringing to you life as it was in Southwestern Colorado. You can go to our History Catalog here to see other books about life in our area as it once was.

To learn more about OCHS, click here, where you’ll find directions to the museum in Ouray. The site has many more details about the museum.

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Cool and widely-read review of Railroad book

review

This review resulted in many sales!

This review of our own Narrow Gauge Railroading in the San Juan Triangle in the Summer, 2010, issue of Classic Trains on page 84, generated lots of sales. The contact information got a bit muddled—the address given is for Mt. Sneffels Press, not the Ridgway Railroad Museum. Although the web URL is provided, I received many letters with checks, some made out to Mt. Sneffels Press, some made out to the Railroad Museum, and some even made out to both! No problem—the books were all shipped promptly.

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Sacrifices! What we do for art! More archery research

Bruise

I figured if I'm going to write about longbows I ought to shoot one. Well, there's a right way and a wrong way.

They say (whoever ‘they’ are) that one should write about what one knows about. Okay, fair enough. My new fantasy novel, The Unexpected Traveler, involves longbows. I’d never shot a longbow. As can be seen in another post (here) I borrowed a modern compound bow and shot it off a few times. But a compound bow is a precision machine. The parts being flexed are made of modern materials. There’s a front sight and a rear sight to help with repeatability. The draw weight is precise.
 
In other words, a compound bow is nothing like a traditional longbow. Continue reading

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Sneffles or Sneffels?

Sneffels

Mt. Sneffels, not Mt. Sneffles!

Well, actually, the correct spelling is Sneffels. That’s f-e-l-s. But apparently people are having trouble finding the website because Sneffels just has to be spelled Sneffles! So, I bit the bullet today. www.mtsnefflespress.com now redirects to www.mtsneffelspress.com. Hopefully that helps!

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E-Books Workshop April 24, 2010

Title page

I gave a workshop on August 24, 2010 on e-book publishing. Click on the image to see the charts (takes you away from mtsneffelspress.com)

I had a great time at a workshop hosted by the Montrose Library and Carole London of London Publishing. I was asked to speak on e-books. Those wishing to see the slides I presented at the ebook workshop can find them here.

To prepare for the conference, I put my first broom book up on Smashwords. That’s a feeder site for Barnes and Noble, Sony, and the new Apple bookstore. You can see the details in the charts.

UPDATE: Here are two questions posed by Cheryl:

Question: Hi Dave,
I enjoyed your workshop at the library yesterday. I have questions! When preparing my book as an e-book, do the various ‘stores’ have a preference for number of pages in the book. In an 81/2×11, single-space format, my book has about 108 pages, including the cover. In 5.5×8.5, single-space pocketbook format, it has 218 pages. Does length of book matter? Does page size matter? Also, I’m still looking for a POD company. Do you offer that service? Thanks, Cheryl Continue reading

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