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		<title>Comment on Current Weather at Mt. Sneffels Press by dave</title>
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		<dc:creator>dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 16 Oct 2011 01:06:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Patric,

See&lt;a href=&quot;http://mtsneffelspress.com/2010/03/20/afb-moved/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt; http://mtsneffelspress.com/2010/03/20/afb-moved/&lt;/a&gt;. The word &quot;plug in&quot; is a hyperlink that will take you to the folks who make a WP plug-in that was necessary to use the php &quot;include&quot; command. The Weatherlink software uploads new info to the site every 15 minutes. The page in WordPress simply &quot;includes&quot; the uploaded files. Unfortunately, the &quot;include&quot; command won&#039;t work without the plug-in, which is free.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Patric,</p>
<p>See<a href="http://mtsneffelspress.com/2010/03/20/afb-moved/" rel="nofollow"> </a><a href="http://mtsneffelspress.com/2010/03/20/afb-moved/" rel="nofollow">http://mtsneffelspress.com/2010/03/20/afb-moved/</a>. The word &#8220;plug in&#8221; is a hyperlink that will take you to the folks who make a WP plug-in that was necessary to use the php &#8220;include&#8221; command. The Weatherlink software uploads new info to the site every 15 minutes. The page in WordPress simply &#8220;includes&#8221; the uploaded files. Unfortunately, the &#8220;include&#8221; command won&#8217;t work without the plug-in, which is free.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Current Weather at Mt. Sneffels Press by Patric Mueller</title>
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		<dc:creator>Patric Mueller</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 15 Oct 2011 08:07:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Dave,

I tried to do the same with my website. I also using a Davis station and Wordpress.
I have seen your comment on the plugin site. How did you achieve this? Ok i`m not so good at coding....

Thank you for your answer!
Best regards
Patric</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Dave,</p>
<p>I tried to do the same with my website. I also using a Davis station and WordPress.<br />
I have seen your comment on the plugin site. How did you achieve this? Ok i`m not so good at coding&#8230;.</p>
<p>Thank you for your answer!<br />
Best regards<br />
Patric</p>
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		<title>Comment on Contact Us by Eve Donegan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Eve Donegan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 31 Jul 2011 16:48:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Dave,

I just left you a message, but I&#039;m a writer with MontroseStyle magazine. For our upcoming fall/winter issue we were hoping to do a bit on local authors and I thought you might be a good contact. 

I&#039;m on a tight deadline, so the earlier you can get back to me the better. Thank you!

Eve -- donegan.eve@gmail.com or 318-8439</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Dave,</p>
<p>I just left you a message, but I&#8217;m a writer with MontroseStyle magazine. For our upcoming fall/winter issue we were hoping to do a bit on local authors and I thought you might be a good contact. </p>
<p>I&#8217;m on a tight deadline, so the earlier you can get back to me the better. Thank you!</p>
<p>Eve &#8212; <a href="mailto:donegan.eve@gmail.com">donegan.eve@gmail.com</a> or 318-8439</p>
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		<title>Comment on Contact Us by Hillary King</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hillary King</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Apr 2011 16:31:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Mr. Casler,

My name is Hillary King, and I am an emergency management consultant with a company called AMEC Earth and Environmental in Boulder.  We are currently writing wildfire mitigation plans for Ouray, Montrose, Gunnison and Delta counties, and I came across your blog when I was looking for pictures of Buckhorn Lakes for the Montrose County plan.  I was wondering if we could please use one of your images of Buckhorn Lakes for that community&#039;s section in the Montrose plan, provided that we give you full credit and acknowledgement in the plan for the image.  We use the photos to illustrate fuel types and topography in each community, but our partners from West Region Wildfire Council and the Colorado State Forest Service were unable to get very far into the Buckhorn Lakes community to take pictures due to snow.

Thank you very much for your time and have a good weekend,
Hillary King</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Mr. Casler,</p>
<p>My name is Hillary King, and I am an emergency management consultant with a company called AMEC Earth and Environmental in Boulder.  We are currently writing wildfire mitigation plans for Ouray, Montrose, Gunnison and Delta counties, and I came across your blog when I was looking for pictures of Buckhorn Lakes for the Montrose County plan.  I was wondering if we could please use one of your images of Buckhorn Lakes for that community&#8217;s section in the Montrose plan, provided that we give you full credit and acknowledgement in the plan for the image.  We use the photos to illustrate fuel types and topography in each community, but our partners from West Region Wildfire Council and the Colorado State Forest Service were unable to get very far into the Buckhorn Lakes community to take pictures due to snow.</p>
<p>Thank you very much for your time and have a good weekend,<br />
Hillary King</p>
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		<title>Comment on Fantasy Catalog by P.Howard</title>
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		<dc:creator>P.Howard</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 17 Jan 2011 20:47:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The missing wand ,the second wand can bring back the first one.You have my email contact me and i will tell you how.</description>
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		<title>Comment on The Story of the Great American Flying Broomstick(in three volumes!) by dave</title>
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		<dc:creator>dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Jan 2011 03:48:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It is fiction&#8212;its inclusion in the Fantasy portion of the website should be enough to indicate that. The word &quot;magic&quot; is loaded, because it means many things to many people. In the Flying Broomstick series the narrator overtly tries to avoid the &quot;magic&quot; term because of its negative connotations to some religions. Yet in my new book, tentatively entitled &lt;em&gt;The Unexpected Traveler&lt;/em&gt;, I embrace the word unabashedly. From a literary point of view, it&#039;s the author&#039;s choice. You might check out the first section of &lt;em&gt;The Unexpected Traveler&lt;/em&gt; at &lt;a href=&quot;http://mtsneffelspress.com/2010/11/13/help-me-make-my-next-novel-better/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;this post&lt;/a&gt;, which includes enough to show the magic I give the main character, Peter. His magic is the ability to heal wounds. I&#039;ll admit I&#039;m rather taken by that idea, and explored it rather thoroughly in the second Flying Broomstick novel (toward the end) and throughout the third Flying Broomstick novel.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It is fiction&mdash;its inclusion in the Fantasy portion of the website should be enough to indicate that. The word &#8220;magic&#8221; is loaded, because it means many things to many people. In the Flying Broomstick series the narrator overtly tries to avoid the &#8220;magic&#8221; term because of its negative connotations to some religions. Yet in my new book, tentatively entitled <em>The Unexpected Traveler</em>, I embrace the word unabashedly. From a literary point of view, it&#8217;s the author&#8217;s choice. You might check out the first section of <em>The Unexpected Traveler</em> at <a href="http://mtsneffelspress.com/2010/11/13/help-me-make-my-next-novel-better/" rel="nofollow">this post</a>, which includes enough to show the magic I give the main character, Peter. His magic is the ability to heal wounds. I&#8217;ll admit I&#8217;m rather taken by that idea, and explored it rather thoroughly in the second Flying Broomstick novel (toward the end) and throughout the third Flying Broomstick novel.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Story of the Great American Flying Broomstick(in three volumes!) by David</title>
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		<dc:creator>David</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 09 Jan 2011 23:08:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wait so is it a true story or just fiction becuase just for your information magic is real and etc.</description>
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		<title>Comment on Help me make my next novel better! by dave</title>
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		<dc:creator>dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Nov 2010 00:21:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;a href=&quot;#comment-2836&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;@dave&lt;/a&gt; 
Jeff, first, many thanks for your thoughtful comments. These are exactly the kinds of things I&#039;m looking for. Regarding back stories for each character,I haven&#039;t done them completely, but I feel as though I know each one personally. Regarding Drogo, my dragon, we will hear very much more from him. The dragons become crucial to the outcome. And, they are rather large creatures. Thanks for catching the &quot;compound low&quot; issue--I&#039;ll fix that right away! Now, regarding Prince Rainier: He is the main character. The book largely revolves around his growth from a rather bookish &quot;second son&quot; to a reluctant participant in the hairy politics of the day, to becoming the hope of the rebellion and, well, you can guess the rest. The book is really his story, narrated through Peter&#039;s eyes. I dithered over 1st person versus 3rd person and opted for 1st person for several reasons: 1) it&#039;s easier to write, 2) ostensibly Peter is writing down his experiences to be included in the collection at the Orgon Library, and 3) I was put onto the Great Book of Amber by Roger Zelazny, which is relatively current (1990s) fantasy and is written in the first person. Item 3 gave me the permission I sought to take it from Peter&#039;s point of view. (I might mention that Peter is the book&#039;s other main character. Peter has some growing up to do himself.) I don&#039;t think writing in the first person is a problem as long as the reader can view the story fully through the narrator&#039;s eyes. We&#039;ll see. So, bottom line, I truly appreciate your comments. They will influence the book. (And re your longbow experience, I&#039;m pleased to see I&#039;m not the only one with a big bruise!) --Dave</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href="#comment-2836" rel="nofollow">@dave</a><br />
Jeff, first, many thanks for your thoughtful comments. These are exactly the kinds of things I&#8217;m looking for. Regarding back stories for each character,I haven&#8217;t done them completely, but I feel as though I know each one personally. Regarding Drogo, my dragon, we will hear very much more from him. The dragons become crucial to the outcome. And, they are rather large creatures. Thanks for catching the &#8220;compound low&#8221; issue&#8211;I&#8217;ll fix that right away! Now, regarding Prince Rainier: He is the main character. The book largely revolves around his growth from a rather bookish &#8220;second son&#8221; to a reluctant participant in the hairy politics of the day, to becoming the hope of the rebellion and, well, you can guess the rest. The book is really his story, narrated through Peter&#8217;s eyes. I dithered over 1st person versus 3rd person and opted for 1st person for several reasons: 1) it&#8217;s easier to write, 2) ostensibly Peter is writing down his experiences to be included in the collection at the Orgon Library, and 3) I was put onto the Great Book of Amber by Roger Zelazny, which is relatively current (1990s) fantasy and is written in the first person. Item 3 gave me the permission I sought to take it from Peter&#8217;s point of view. (I might mention that Peter is the book&#8217;s other main character. Peter has some growing up to do himself.) I don&#8217;t think writing in the first person is a problem as long as the reader can view the story fully through the narrator&#8217;s eyes. We&#8217;ll see. So, bottom line, I truly appreciate your comments. They will influence the book. (And re your longbow experience, I&#8217;m pleased to see I&#8217;m not the only one with a big bruise!) &#8211;Dave</p>
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		<title>Comment on Help me make my next novel better! by dave</title>
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		<dc:creator>dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 29 Nov 2010 00:10:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Jeff sent this to me as an e-mail, fearing it was too long for a comment. I like his thoughts so much, I&#039;d like others to see them too. I also post a reply to his comment. Here are Jeff&#039;s thoughts:

I liked the review sample of TUT, a lot.

I like the way you manage to add characters right and left while still making each one a realistic person.  Although I  don&#039;t know this, it wouldn&#039;t surprise me if each and every  character had a full back story.  Leaving the reader with  this impression takes skill and talent in character  development. (Or else it takes a whole lot of back  stories!)

Although he came and went awfully quick, I love the dragon and look forward to his next appearance.  Most fantasy  writers describe dragons as if they could withstand 50 psf  wing loading and generate 500 shp to maintain level flight.  I&#039;ll bet those poorly scaled dragons irritate you more  than they bother me, since I&#039;m not an aviator.  Anyway,  it&#039;s nice to &quot;see&quot; a more reasonable dragon in a fantasy.

I personally find the idea of a planet inhabited by several intelligent races stretches my credulity.  Unfortunately,  the success of the Narnia books and Lord of the Rings means  I just have to put up with stretch marks on my credulity.

I see an early comment about the map.  In my opinion you shouldn&#039;t worry much about a pretty map or USGS accuracy.   Exact locations are seldom crucial to the story and when I  read a book which contains a map, I seldom if ever refer  back to the map.  If it&#039;s good enough for your own  reference, so you can write clear directions into the  story, then it&#039;s good enough.

There&#039;s a silly omission when we first drive up to the mine site.  When we get to the steep switchback road, we shift  into &quot;compound low&quot;.  When we reach the top of this steep  stretch, we don&#039;t shift the differential back to high.   This gives the reader a jar when we reach the mine area  turnoff and AGAIN shift into compound low, or &quot;double low&quot;  as they say here in the midwest.  At most, it will take one  sentence to fix.

I have a real problem with Prince Rainier.  He seems to have way too much influence over us.  Is this his magic; is  something more sinister afoot?  Is the author leading up to  a denouement where we help the Prince onto the throne only  to discover his dark side?  His character is confusing, and  the subtle hints are muddied.  I&#039;ll take  my adventure  fantasy clear cut!  Thank you.

Now comes the long part of this email.  I hope you&#039;re up right now.  If you&#039;re on a down cycle, please read the rest  some time when you&#039;re up.  I&#039;m really trying to pass along  an insight which might help, but the implication could be a  little distressing.

I enjoyed the review piece of TUT.  I like the books about Odd Thomas, by Dean Koontz.  I also found myself rereading  the first chapter of a novel I&#039;d started writing some time  ago, and loved it.  What do these all have in common?   They&#039;re written in the first person, in a style which  invites the reader to identify with the protagonist.

Fine, good, great, so I liked them all.  So why am I currently rewriting my novel?  I&#039;m changing the person and  style from first person chronological, to third person  omniscient.  And what will seem odd at first is, I won&#039;t  enjoy reading it in the new style as much as I did the  original.

Why?

Because once I realized WHY I liked the first style so much, it became obvious why so many critics and writing  mentors recommend avoiding that style.  I don&#039;t know why  they don&#039;t spell it out...

When a characterization invites me to identify with the protagonist and experience the action well enough to /grab/  me, then it will serve equally well to /reject/ other  readers.  For example: the character in my novel is a  highly intelligent man who has broken new ground in  scholastic and theological philosophy.  The story he&#039;s  immersed into doesn&#039;t depend on those characteristics, and  the story is compelling on its own.  So I have a whole  universe of readers who would like the story, but the  protagonist is a strong character, and it&#039;s narrated from  his point of view.  As a result, I&#039;ve just rejected the  following readers: all women; everyone with a bad attitude  toward philosophy (at least 80% of those who had to take it  in college); everyone with a poor regard for theology;  anyone who considers themselves a non intellectual.  Not  only that, but it&#039;s almost impossible to sell a first- person narrative to the moviemakers, and my novel could  make a great movie.

That&#039;s why first person narratives don&#039;t work.  Obviously they actually do work, because the Odd Thomas novels  mentioned earlier made it onto best seller lists.  But how  much wider an audience would they attract if they were  written in another style?  More important IMHO, how many  more readers could have enjoyed the great stories?

I loved your blog entry and picture about trying a long bow.  As a kid I read some historical works regarding the  English long bow and its use in battle.  Then I read  Heinlein&#039;s &quot;Glory Road&quot;, in which the protagonist picks up  an English long bow for the first time in his life and  proceeds to drive two arrows into the bullseye.  HA!  What  silliness...  Except that shortly after reading  that novel, I had the opportunity to actually shoot a bow  for the first time, a cheap fiberglass  long bow at summer camp.  I reviewed what I&#039;d read in the  battle instructions: pull until your  thumb touches your ear, then release; line up the arrow  head on the target; recall where the arrow  struck, relative to the arrow head; with the next shot move  the arrow head to compensate.  My  first arrow hit the dirt to the side of the target (50 feet  away).  My second arrow hit the  target.  My third and last hit the bullseye.  When the  counselor yelled, &quot;Lucky hit!&quot; I demanded  three more arrows.  All three nearly scraped each other, in  the bullseye.  Suddenly Heinlein no  longer seemed fantastic!

And the inside of my left arm was bloody!!!  :O</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jeff sent this to me as an e-mail, fearing it was too long for a comment. I like his thoughts so much, I&#8217;d like others to see them too. I also post a reply to his comment. Here are Jeff&#8217;s thoughts:</p>
<p>I liked the review sample of TUT, a lot.</p>
<p>I like the way you manage to add characters right and left while still making each one a realistic person.  Although I  don&#8217;t know this, it wouldn&#8217;t surprise me if each and every  character had a full back story.  Leaving the reader with  this impression takes skill and talent in character  development. (Or else it takes a whole lot of back  stories!)</p>
<p>Although he came and went awfully quick, I love the dragon and look forward to his next appearance.  Most fantasy  writers describe dragons as if they could withstand 50 psf  wing loading and generate 500 shp to maintain level flight.  I&#8217;ll bet those poorly scaled dragons irritate you more  than they bother me, since I&#8217;m not an aviator.  Anyway,  it&#8217;s nice to &#8220;see&#8221; a more reasonable dragon in a fantasy.</p>
<p>I personally find the idea of a planet inhabited by several intelligent races stretches my credulity.  Unfortunately,  the success of the Narnia books and Lord of the Rings means  I just have to put up with stretch marks on my credulity.</p>
<p>I see an early comment about the map.  In my opinion you shouldn&#8217;t worry much about a pretty map or USGS accuracy.   Exact locations are seldom crucial to the story and when I  read a book which contains a map, I seldom if ever refer  back to the map.  If it&#8217;s good enough for your own  reference, so you can write clear directions into the  story, then it&#8217;s good enough.</p>
<p>There&#8217;s a silly omission when we first drive up to the mine site.  When we get to the steep switchback road, we shift  into &#8220;compound low&#8221;.  When we reach the top of this steep  stretch, we don&#8217;t shift the differential back to high.   This gives the reader a jar when we reach the mine area  turnoff and AGAIN shift into compound low, or &#8220;double low&#8221;  as they say here in the midwest.  At most, it will take one  sentence to fix.</p>
<p>I have a real problem with Prince Rainier.  He seems to have way too much influence over us.  Is this his magic; is  something more sinister afoot?  Is the author leading up to  a denouement where we help the Prince onto the throne only  to discover his dark side?  His character is confusing, and  the subtle hints are muddied.  I&#8217;ll take  my adventure  fantasy clear cut!  Thank you.</p>
<p>Now comes the long part of this email.  I hope you&#8217;re up right now.  If you&#8217;re on a down cycle, please read the rest  some time when you&#8217;re up.  I&#8217;m really trying to pass along  an insight which might help, but the implication could be a  little distressing.</p>
<p>I enjoyed the review piece of TUT.  I like the books about Odd Thomas, by Dean Koontz.  I also found myself rereading  the first chapter of a novel I&#8217;d started writing some time  ago, and loved it.  What do these all have in common?   They&#8217;re written in the first person, in a style which  invites the reader to identify with the protagonist.</p>
<p>Fine, good, great, so I liked them all.  So why am I currently rewriting my novel?  I&#8217;m changing the person and  style from first person chronological, to third person  omniscient.  And what will seem odd at first is, I won&#8217;t  enjoy reading it in the new style as much as I did the  original.</p>
<p>Why?</p>
<p>Because once I realized WHY I liked the first style so much, it became obvious why so many critics and writing  mentors recommend avoiding that style.  I don&#8217;t know why  they don&#8217;t spell it out&#8230;</p>
<p>When a characterization invites me to identify with the protagonist and experience the action well enough to /grab/  me, then it will serve equally well to /reject/ other  readers.  For example: the character in my novel is a  highly intelligent man who has broken new ground in  scholastic and theological philosophy.  The story he&#8217;s  immersed into doesn&#8217;t depend on those characteristics, and  the story is compelling on its own.  So I have a whole  universe of readers who would like the story, but the  protagonist is a strong character, and it&#8217;s narrated from  his point of view.  As a result, I&#8217;ve just rejected the  following readers: all women; everyone with a bad attitude  toward philosophy (at least 80% of those who had to take it  in college); everyone with a poor regard for theology;  anyone who considers themselves a non intellectual.  Not  only that, but it&#8217;s almost impossible to sell a first- person narrative to the moviemakers, and my novel could  make a great movie.</p>
<p>That&#8217;s why first person narratives don&#8217;t work.  Obviously they actually do work, because the Odd Thomas novels  mentioned earlier made it onto best seller lists.  But how  much wider an audience would they attract if they were  written in another style?  More important IMHO, how many  more readers could have enjoyed the great stories?</p>
<p>I loved your blog entry and picture about trying a long bow.  As a kid I read some historical works regarding the  English long bow and its use in battle.  Then I read  Heinlein&#8217;s &#8220;Glory Road&#8221;, in which the protagonist picks up  an English long bow for the first time in his life and  proceeds to drive two arrows into the bullseye.  HA!  What  silliness&#8230;  Except that shortly after reading  that novel, I had the opportunity to actually shoot a bow  for the first time, a cheap fiberglass  long bow at summer camp.  I reviewed what I&#8217;d read in the  battle instructions: pull until your  thumb touches your ear, then release; line up the arrow  head on the target; recall where the arrow  struck, relative to the arrow head; with the next shot move  the arrow head to compensate.  My  first arrow hit the dirt to the side of the target (50 feet  away).  My second arrow hit the  target.  My third and last hit the bullseye.  When the  counselor yelled, &#8220;Lucky hit!&#8221; I demanded  three more arrows.  All three nearly scraped each other, in  the bullseye.  Suddenly Heinlein no  longer seemed fantastic!</p>
<p>And the inside of my left arm was bloody!!!  :O</p>
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		<title>Comment on Help me make my next novel better! by dave</title>
		<link>http://mtsneffelspress.com/2010/11/13/help-me-make-my-next-novel-better/comment-page-1/#comment-2733</link>
		<dc:creator>dave</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Nov 2010 16:25:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the kind words! I&#039;m curious what refinements you had in mind&#8212;please pass them along. Sometimes I can look right at something and not see the problem because I&#039;m so close to the story. Regarding writing, I&#039;ve been asked that question many times. Yes, I outline, but only to get the ideas in order. I create character biographies. The most important is creating the conflict&#8212;without the conflict, there&#039;s no story. Then I plunge in. It often seems to me that the story unfolds on the screen. The characters take on lives of their own. It just pours out on the screen. That&#039;s not a very scientific explanation, is it? But that&#039;s how it works for me. I have to be careful not to go too fast, because although I can see the scene in my mind, if I don&#039;t put enough on paper, the reader can&#039;t. So I need to examine all five senses to ensure the reader has enough information to visualize it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the kind words! I&#8217;m curious what refinements you had in mind&mdash;please pass them along. Sometimes I can look right at something and not see the problem because I&#8217;m so close to the story. Regarding writing, I&#8217;ve been asked that question many times. Yes, I outline, but only to get the ideas in order. I create character biographies. The most important is creating the conflict&mdash;without the conflict, there&#8217;s no story. Then I plunge in. It often seems to me that the story unfolds on the screen. The characters take on lives of their own. It just pours out on the screen. That&#8217;s not a very scientific explanation, is it? But that&#8217;s how it works for me. I have to be careful not to go too fast, because although I can see the scene in my mind, if I don&#8217;t put enough on paper, the reader can&#8217;t. So I need to examine all five senses to ensure the reader has enough information to visualize it.</p>
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