Barbara is following the “chapter a week” philosophy. Some of her comments so far: “I’m interested to see how your creativity differs from other authors.” “What a surprise to find Moses in a story. Very unusual. And neat the way he just disappeared. Also interesting that our hero rides a motorcycle.” “Thanks for the installment. It’s got some good chuckles in it. And the chapter ends with a page-turner.”
Thanks, Barbara! And please pass on those chapters on to your friends!